Revise your introduction according to the guidelines we came up with when we read the Powder sample intro paragraphs. Type up those changes.
Then, using a quote that relates to your motif, type a quotation sandwich paragraph that will go after your intro.
We will be working on these in the lab tomorow so make sure you upload this document to your P drive, e-mail it to yourself, and/or print it out so you can access them tomorrow. It’d be better to have it in virtual form so you don’t have to type up it up again.